3.17.2009
i need to have a plan.
--take 1 hour on Sundays after church or after college group to write/blog about experience
--read 1 book a week about PNG starting after Spring Break
--take note of elements of culture, travel writing
--read 2 books during Spring Break
--contact Rolf Potts during Spring Break
--order tape recorder by April 1st
--review vocab on Wednesdays
--go to the gym 3x a week
the whole point.
I'm going to
The issues the committee had with my proposal were many and crucial to the purpose of the project, so I was frustrated and disheartened. I was considering not resubmitting my proposal for a few reasons (including a nonrefundable down payment for the trip that would have to be submitted before a decision would be made by the committee), but then I had a conversation with a good friend. Jen urged me to resubmit, because she said that I would always wonder if my proposal would have been accepted had I resubmitted. And how was God to work if I didn't step out in faith? And so I did. And it was accepted. And I'm going to
Stories from
Richter Grant Proposal
2009
Submitted by: Sara Kelm
Faculty Sponsor: Dr. Melanie Springer Mock
Department of Writing and Literature
“The antidote to cultural discombobulation is never retreat; it is immersion.”[1]
–Gayle Foreman, You Can’t Get There from Here
Topic of Research
The significance of story pervades nearly every culture. History remembered through the telling and retelling of stories helps bind individuals to their people. Grandpas still take little boys onto their laps to tell stories, and moms still read Dr. Seuss to their little girls before bedtime. Stories can also bring humans of disparate backgrounds together and create understanding. When people engage a different culture, they find that stories may be told in different languages but their themes are similar.
Papua New Guinea (PNG) is a much different culture than that of the
Existing Research
Most of the books about
Travel nonfiction comprises the other category of books about
My written project will fall under this genre, involving research in a few ways. First, in order to write an engaging travel nonfiction essay, the writer needs to go somewhere. The travel itself is research, for the entire piece will be based on the experiences had in this unfamiliar place. This is not tourism travel; this is traveler travel. Rolf Potts (a George Fox alum and well-known travel writer) makes this distinction, saying, “Tourists leave home to escape the world, while travelers leave home to experience the world.”[3] It is travel with a specific focus and purpose: to relay the information of a new culture to those who have never experienced it. This involves great attention to detail, including a great deal of note-taking and asking of questions.
The other aspect to the research comes after the experience. Travel writing, in order for it to be truly impacting, must inform. The numerous travel essays I read were peppered with facts about the place the author had experienced. To do this requires a thorough knowledge of the place and its history, including economic information, social structure, and political experiences. These facts never stuck out in the well-written essays I read; they were interwoven within the text, tying the facts and figures into the narrative. There is a delicate balance between the story and the history, a difficult line to walk as Potts relays in his book.
Through my own research, I am interested in continuing to read these essays and anthropological studies and comparing them with what I see and experience in
Methodology
If awarded the Richter Scholars grant, I will begin in Spring 2009 by researching the culture and people of
I will be doing this research in conjunction with a Cross-Cultural Study trip from
The team will be led by Rhett Luedtke, an associate professor of theatre; Todd Luedtke, an adjunct professor of theatre; and Jere Witherspoon, the executive assistant to the Vice President of Student Life; all three have lived in Papua New Guinea. In addition to our three faculty advisors, this trip will be composed of nine
The group leaves for PNG arrives in PNG on May 7th, 2009. We will spend time at
Next the team will travel to Ukarumpa, the center for the Summer Institute of Linguistics (SIL) and a base of operations for translating the Bible into the numerous tribal languages contained within PNG. While there, I will talk with missionary women and children about their experiences in PNG, as well as the indigenous people who live and work with the missionaries.
Following Ukarumpa, we will travel to Goroka and meet up with the National Performing Arts Troupe (NPAT), a group that brings arts into highland villages. NPAT will teach the team to dance and express native stories, while the George Fox actors will teach them some American stories. During this time, I will be an observer of the native lifestyle of many New Guineans, and record it to the best of my ability, while always looking for opportunities to hear people’s stories.
As I am not a full-fledged member of the team, my qualifications are different, reflecting my purpose. I am not an actor; instead, I have a unique mixture of gifts that make me the right purpose to engage in this research. First, I am a student of literature. It is my major and my hobby, reading works and analyzing them and their effectiveness. I am also a student of writing, and I desire to learn how to more effectively communicate through the written word. Secondly, I am a student of psychology. I am fascinated by the human mind and what makes a person who she is. The interplay between nature and nurture is no more vivid than in an unfamiliar culture, where an observer can see obvious similarities and differences between himself and an individual of the other culture. These two areas of study both value the concept of story and its impact in the lives of people all over the world, whether the story is fiction or nonfiction. And while I have never been an actor, I have been previously involved in the world of theatre, so I understand the concepts behind the stories that the team will be telling and the stories that the New Guineans will tell us back.
When I return, I will embark on writing this piece of travel nonfiction. My faculty sponsor is Writing and Literature professor Dr. Melanie Springer Mock, a scholar of creative nonfiction and autobiography. Throughout summer 2009, working half-time and paid by a stipend from the Richter Grant, I will meet with her in person and over email to discuss specific tactics to strengthen my writing for impact on various audiences. Her experience and expertise lends her to being a discerning critic of nonfiction work, and her input will be invaluable.
My writing process will be synthesizing those stories I recorded into an interesting and readable format, then combining them with my personal story. I will focus on the events that occurred during my trip, the people I met while in PNG, and the significant moments I encountered. I will also include the observations and experiences of my fellow travelers, in terms of their reactions and interactions with the culture. The final piece of the story will be an informative aspect, a vital aspect as discussed previously. As PNG is an isolated island with very little tourist culture, the general public is sorely uneducated about the people that survive there. This section of my writing will require much research so that I report the facts about PNG to the best of my ability. I will use this piece in its entirety as a chance to entertain and educate the reader. All throughout this time of writing, I will continue to read other travel memoirs to see how others craft their stories about PNG and other places around the world.
After revisions and criticism from various other literary professors at George Fox, I will finish my final draft. Once it is finished, I will have a better idea of where my contribution should fit into the realm of travel essays or George Fox culture. I will seek to publish my work in magazines about travel, faith, and/or culture, as well as through
Benefits
George Fox will reap benefits from this research. As stated earlier, there are few people who know anything about
I see a great deal of personal benefits. I believe this experience in
Outcomes
The outcome of this project will be a research-based travel and cross-cultural creative nonfiction work of writing about the country of Papua New Guinea as experienced by myself, my fellow student travelers from George Fox University, the faculty that accompany us, and those who live and work in PNG. The piece will be at least 25 pages long, and contain stories from native Papua New Guineans, stories from Americans, and aspects of the history of PNG.
Once my piece is finished, it may be of use to
I will also seek publication outside the George Fox community. I am unsure as to how long the final piece will be, but I will submit it for publication either in whole or in parts. There are numerous creative nonfiction markets where potential publication could occur. Creative nonfiction magazines such as Brevity, Image, Relief, Ruminate, and Literary Traveler are possible markets for publication. I could also see my work in the magazines like Salon and Smithsonian. If possible, I would like to present my work at the Northwest Undergraduate Literature Conference at The University of Portland; the National Undergraduate Literature Conference in Ogden, Utah; and Northwest University’s Sigma Tau Delta Conference.
Lastly, I will seek to create a public reading night for Writing/Literature majors and minors to share the pieces that they have been working on. My desire is that the night will generate support for peers who create art rarely expressed in the classroom setting. It will be in a public place (such as Chapters), open to the George Fox community, and hopefully stir some excitement and pride in what we as students, scholars, and people of faith can produce. I will present this piece of writing at that time.
[1] Foreman, Gayle. You Can’t Get There from Here: A Year on the Fringes of a Shrinking World.
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[3] Potts, Rolf. “Storming ‘The Beach.’” Marco Polo Didn’t Go There.
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3.11.2009
First Post
I am going to Papua New Guinea. In less than 7 weeks.